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5 Comments
Bonnie Fritz
1/17/2020 10:34:01 pm
It is too soon. In the honeymoon for visitors. Nicolas may be Marcos best friend, but friends do not belong in this instance.
Julie Spencer
1/18/2020 05:38:39 am
How many days would be acceptable? Ten? Easy fix.
Bonnie Fritz
1/18/2020 08:53:49 am
When ever the honeymoon is considered to be finished. Probably after the couples have returned home.
Julie Spencer
1/18/2020 08:59:45 am
There is a very specific reason why they HAVE to meet up in Puerto Aventuras and it affects the entire rest of the series. I don't mind changing the number of days, but they have to have dinner together at that exact spot while on their honeymoons. Like I said, that moment changes the course of the whole series.
Bonnie Fritz
1/18/2020 09:30:08 am
See, thats where you have a definite advantage, you know where any event is leading. I just thought that it sounds strange to meet up 6 friends on your honeymoon. By the way, I have enjoyed the story thus far. You have a special style for developing interest in the characters. Leave a Reply. |
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