Did he ever get that second burrito? Hazel sounds more sophisticated than Mark. . Things are moving slowly, and it would be nice to have more details about their afternoon. Also did the others succeed on the skyboard?
Good catch on the burrito! Although this was the end of the chapter, it's not the end of the afternoon so maybe I need to reword that and/or combine a few chapters. Tonight's chapter starts off with them meeting back up with the guys so I'll see if I can rearrange this whole section during edits. Thanks for the feedback! -Julie