This sentence feels wrong. Like it's missing a joining word.
I have mixed feelings about this end. I was happy he did, and yet angry he did. As if it's a promise of what's to come but yet not. Then just walks away. Plus Amberlyn is her friend. Or supposed to be. Just thoughts roaming in my mind.
I changed that! They no longer kiss in that scene. I'll go in and change that. -Julie
Teya, I went in and changed the wording within the blog post. Check it out and see what you think. Starting with Our eyes met...