This was way short. How mant chapters are in the book? For me I'm about to give up on her and frankly Dylan should be about to as well.
She's got to see something more or notice something more cause if she doesn't soon and start to change her mind a swift okay by Eddie hello dylan is not going to be believable. Does that make sense. Unless your dragging it out to 40 plus chapters. Yikes.
Hope that makes sense and helps.
So, does Eddy find redemption?
(He had a pretty rough start, but that's only to be expected if he's been in jail.)
Rhetorical question, yes.
Oh, my friends. Patience, patience! Big things are soon to happen!