I just love Aiden. Swoon ☺️
Young love, with sensitive characters. Oh! My!
I do love this. I admit a little weird but Aiden is a gentleman.
I have questions about this paragraph.
Back in my mom’s bathroom, "Amberlyn was searching through the collection to find a bath bomb that exploded purple swirls into the water and must have felt heavenly because she moaned, and her shoulders relaxed."
The wording is off. You mean she was looking for a purple bath balm because he walk in and she was in the tub. It just needs a little tweaking.
Sounding good though. I just hope Amblynn understands what she has in Aiden. The last chapter did hint to it.
I hope she does too.