Chapter Thirty-Eight of Strike Three, You're Mine

11/21/2019

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Great news! Strike Three, You’re Mine: All’s Fair in Love and Sports is now available on Amazon! Happy reading! -Julie

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Paula

11/21/2019 08:22:27 pm

I just love Aiden. Swoon ☺️

Bonnie. C.

11/21/2019 09:38:53 pm

Young love, with sensitive characters. Oh! My!

Teya

11/22/2019 05:41:55 am

I do love this. I admit a little weird but Aiden is a gentleman.
I have questions about this paragraph.
Back in my mom’s bathroom, "Amberlyn was searching through the collection to find a bath bomb that exploded purple swirls into the water and must have felt heavenly because she moaned, and her shoulders relaxed."
The wording is off. You mean she was looking for a purple bath balm because he walk in and she was in the tub. It just needs a little tweaking.
Sounding good though. I just hope Amblynn understands what she has in Aiden. The last chapter did hint to it.

Paula

11/22/2019 06:46:50 am

I hope she does too.

Chapter Thirty-Eight of Strike Three, You're Mine

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